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Music video; 'Creepin'.
Good presentation, very clear and informative, decisions well justified.
- be very careful with the light and dark set up- this can be very problematic. You will need to use spotlights. You may be better using black and white.
- good to see reference to intertextuality and lots of different locations.
- like the film style web design but you will have to justify this in your statement of intent.
- good choice of talent. you need to think much more carefully about the composition of shots- beach scenes are good but the background on the housing estate is too distracting I am not getting Careless Whisper vibes, that could be achieved by more close up interior shots that are very carefully lit.
- always be aware of what is going on in the background of your shots.
- 30 secs- artist Q&A.
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